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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 5, 2005 18:29:35 GMT -5
Hi!So, I was chattin with Enigma and I told about my fic, he suggested me post here...and well, here I'm!!! Anyways..here are 1st chapter.PLz, if u liked and have a suggestion, tell me! ;D But, if u didn't like plz, tell me what I would do to make the fic get better! ;Dk, now I'll shut the hell up Chapter 1 needing changesBlossom woke up and called for Bubbles and Buttercup " COMMON GALS!We have school and the day to save!" "ohhh, man!"Buttercup murmured "Blossom!Its Sunday!I want get some sleep" "Buttercup." Blossom began casually "its MONDAY!" she finished yelling "OH, YEAH!he he he"Buttercup replied embarassed.Blossom just rolled her eyes and put her cloths "Buttercup I don't know when u'll get more responsible!You need be more mature!"Blossom told her brunnete sister "OH!Shut IT!We have a lot of years to be more responsible!Actually I think YOU need change!" "huh?" "Blossom, you think u try be soooo perfect.You try be sooooo mature!" Buttercup said, now, looking serious."Blossom!Face it!You are living sooo wrong nobody can be so rational all the time!Live is not that red!Life is for commit mistakes, learn and laugh at them, do stupid things and feel that!" "Buttercup"Blossom began speechless, her eyes full of tears, but she managed to control herself"put your dress"And with that the leader leave her green eyed sister. Buttercup just sighed and shook her head, then, she saw Bubbles, who was hugging Octi, looking like an angel and sleeping like a rock.Buttercup smiled devilish as she was ready to do what she loves to do.She jumped at the bed, abruptally screaming "!WAKE UP!""aaaaaaaaahhhh!" that had made lil Bubbles cry "Bu, Bu, Buttercup" Bubbles began as she looks like cry "professooooooooor!" she cried on the top of her tiny voice Buttercup was just laughing. 1st scolding of the day! A RECORD! ----------------------------------------------------------------------- At Pokey Oaks kindergarten "Bubbles!YOU ARE A SUCH A CRYBABY!"Buttercup yelled "GIMME IT!" She was trying catch Octi from Bubbles "NO!" "YES!" "NO!" "YES!" "NO!" "YES" "NO!" "YES" "N-" "STOP!" Blossom demmanded as the others stopped.The red head sighed "Could you two stop fight just want single minute-" And at this very moment the hotline rings.Blossom flew to get it. "HI MAYOR!"she asked as the usuall "HEEELLOOOO" she heard a very well-know voice "so, loser, how school are going?" "BRICK!" Blossom growled furious "what the heck are you doing?" "hey isn't it obvious?sshh...and you are to suppose be the smart one!" "BRICK!BRICK..." Blossom was speechless by fury "YEAH!Its my name, I see that you love repeat it huh?thats k, I cause that in women"Brick was sure having much fun! Blossom took a deep breath "Where.is.the.mayor?"she was gritting her teeth. "YOU AREN'T REALLY VERY SMART, ARE YOU?" Brick was laughing hard. That was enough to Blossom "AAAAAHH!GIRLS!TO THE CITY HALL!she cried to Bubbles and Buttercup and then, they flew to the city. at the city hall; "DUDE!" Butch began to Brick "What was that?" his brother still laughing "nothing" Brick said trying to control himself "I just love do this to her,she's awesome when she's mad!" as he still laughing.Although Brick hates admit, Blossom is always 'awesome'... ----------------------------------------------------------------------
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 5, 2005 18:32:23 GMT -5
er, I tried do that chapter better...I think it's still too short.Well, I'll do that story in a very slowly process!
Chapter 2.Fighting
"well, well, well...looks who is here Brick!" Butch began
"The Powderpuff Girls!" Boomer complete, and laughed "hahahahahah-ouch!" as he gasped as he received a smack across the head by Brick.
"no stupid!" Brick yelled
"ITS THE POWDERPUFF GIRLS!" and with this he and Butch started to laugh VERY hard.
The girls just rolled their eyes
"alright!" Buttercup shouted "I want some fight!You bunch of jerks!" She yelled, ready to a challenge
"what!" Boomer and Butch gasped
"ooooh, thats it!BOYS!LET SHOW THE SISSIES!" Brick demmanded
"yeah!" the other boys nodded.
And with that, the three flew towards their respectives counterparts.
"oh, common!" Blossom demmanded to the others as they started the fight.
Blossom flew towards Brick, punching his jaw and sending him to a wall
Bubbles used her supersonic scream just stopping Boomer
Buttercup kicked Butch, and punched him hardly at the stomach sending him to the same wall where Brick was beated.
Then, she went help Bubbles beat Boomer up;
----------------------------------------------------------------------- The rest of the fight wasn't nothing out of the ordinary.The girls eventually won.
The boys were at Townsville Park.
"Oh, man!Can ya believe those sissies!" Butch cried as he kicked the air.
"They were just luck" Brick said raising an eyebrow to his brothers."Next time we'll beat those wimps"
"REEEAAAALLYYY!"Butch yelled sarcastically "Brick, since when are we waiting for the next time!SINCE ALWAYS!"
Brick stared mad at his green eyed brother, ready to fight him...
But he didn't.Butch was right.And Brick was very disappointed too.
"hey!hey!" Boomer waved excited to his brothers.Both glared at the blond boy."what if we ask for help? Mojo could help us!"
Butch and Brick slowly glared at each other, then to Boomer
"Boomer" Brick began emotionally "you are really really stupid sometimes...you say really really stupid things most of the time..."
now, Brick is facing Boomer
"But, ask help for Mojo..."Brick dropped his head, as he said it quietlly
"yeeeeess?" Boomer asked more and more near of Brick
"Boomer...that..."
"huuuuh?" Boomer asked more and more excited as Brick was facing him again.
"WAS THE WORST IDEA EVER YOU RETARDED!" Brick yelled angry as he smacked Boomer's head.
"ouch!why!" Boomer asked quite disappointed
"help! Mojo!He would never want help us!"Brick yelled
"yeah!" Butch agreed "That was the dumbest idea ever!"
"BUT WE NEVER ASKED FOR HELP BEFORE!" he said with a enthusiasm "And he want destroy the PowderPuffs!Actually...HE created us to do that!"
Butch and Brick glared each other.
Then Brick stared at Boomer...you know...maybe Boomer wasn't soo stupid...
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 5, 2005 18:33:25 GMT -5
Chapter 3
The boys landed near of Mojo's observatory.They were staring at the door...Many things were at their heads-something that usually DON'T happen!-To them, it wasn't ask for help to a father!They just didn't see Mojo like their father...But unfortunatelly they were feeling it!Yes...it was hard to believe but the RowdyRuff Boys can feel!Ggggrrr...
They were asking themselves things like:
Could them do it?Would Mojo help them?Would Mojo laugh at them?Would Mojo use them?Would this be a big disappointment?
All the boys were doubtfully.Especially Brick!
How could him follow Boomer's idea?And...ASK for help!Unfortunatelly Brick was the most arrogant of the RRBs...and he knew it!He knew that it would be a such big pain inthe ass!And what if he got frightened by that?(if it was a disappointment)
He was well-know by his strongness(n/a:I didn't know what put here...sorry if the grammar is wrong!), buthe wasn't made by rock!It was very hard to realise and believe, but, as he's the heartless one, the strongest...he had a heart...DANG!
d**n FEELINGS!He's a man!He's the leader!He's suppose to have a heart made by ice...or rock...whatever...
"soooo..." Brick heard Butch began, Brick realised that his brother is trembling."g-g-go on dude!" Butch told Brick
"ME?" Brick gasped "why ME?I,i, it was Boomer's idea!" pointing to the dumb one
"WHAT!" Boomer replied, eyes wide"B, b, but you are the leader!"
Brick sighed.How he hate when Boomer suddenly gets smart!
So, he was going to bang gently Mojo's door.But stopped
"wait!What the hell am I doing!" He yelled to himself.
And kicked Mojo's door to make it open.The evil monkey was sleeping at his couch inside the observatory
The boys stopped.
"whooops, lets back later" Boomer whispered
"huh?" Butch whispered back
"lets be back later" Boomer repeated
" why?and why are we whispering?"
"Beacuse, Mojo is sleeeeeping"
"And soo..."
"It would be rude woke him up!" Boomer said rolling his eyes just like if Butch was called the dumbest one.
"WHAT!" Brick shouted "OH MAN!MOJO!" he cried as Mojo woke up
"AAAAH!NO!MOM!NO!" Mojo yelling from his sleep
and as he realised the RRBs invading his observatory.
"What are you doing here? why are you here, since its not to you suppose be here, coz you usually are never here!And I know how many times you are here coz I live here!Whats mean thats my house!And since it's my house-"
He get interrupted by a punch in the jaw
"SHUT IT!" Brick yelled, Mojo had eventually stopped.Brick grabbed Mojo by the collar
"LOOK BIG BRAIN," Brick began annoyed "We need destroy the PPGs and we need you!"
"me!" Mojo asked "how me! I mean, why me, since you have a lot of villains in the town, and why do you need my help-"
Brick punched Mojo again, and grabbed his collar firmer
"Look, we don't have to say WHY we picked you!" Brick began
"yeah!" Butch said as he and Boomer flew towards Mojo and Brick "We just want you and your huge tecnology..."
"...To destroy the PowderPuff Brats!" Boomer finished
Mojo just stared at them with a you are kidding me? glare
"Think better Mojo!" Brick said in his most persuasive voice "We have powers, you have cool weapons and machines!Common..." and in a (fake) very emotional baby voice "daddy..."
Mojo stared at the RRBs...yes...maybe...he got a perfect plan few days ago, and all his need is someone strong and powerfull enoughto help.
It would be his opportunity...the opportunity of beat up the PPGs and takehis sons back!The sons who Him had stole
"soooooo?" Brick stared apprehensive to Mojo
Mojo stayed a bit quiet.But finally answered
"LETS DO IT." He replied sinisterly with a big evil grim
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 5, 2005 18:34:38 GMT -5
okay...so, that chapt is just like...a part of a chapter!Its really really short!
Chapter 4
Mojo tried patiently explain his plan to the boys
"So, how you see...I had a plan to destroy the powderpuffs, but I can't act!Coz its the way of I made the plan!Which is made to destroy the powderpuffs!And the way of I made the plan it's not possible to..."
"ok ok ok...We got it dude-monkey!" Brick interrupted "but whats up with the d**n plan?"
"Well, here is..."
And Mojo explained detail per detail.
"Sooooooo...what.Is.Your.Answer?" Mojo asked, very confident, he was sure what will be the answer
The boys glared at each other.The plan was brilliant.Just like Mojo called: 'perfect'
So, there were they.With a 'perfect plan' facing them.And maybe, a chance to beat the girls up.A chance to do what they were createds to do!They wouldn't reject it!... Would they?
Brick sighed.Dropping his head.Something was telling him to don't do that.Something was telling him to don't destroy...
Brick closed his eyes tight.WHY?Why don't do that?It is what he ALWAYS wanted to do, isn't it?Oh, shut up!SURE IT IS!
He glared at Boomer, who was looking very pleased about the plan; same with Butch.His brothers sure wanted to do it, Brick wasn't the only one created to destroy the powerpuffs.He wasn't alone in all that!He couldn't do it.He couldn't do it with his brothers...No matter what he thinks...or...well, somehow feel.
He glared again to Mojo.The evil simian wasn't looking so happy and confident now.His big evil grim has failed...Mojo was looking half sad, half disappointed, and a bit angry.
He knew it"Brick didn't want do that.The answer was 'no'.He will not have his sons back. He'll not destroy the PowerPuff Girls.He should know...
"Mojo." Brick began quietly
"huh?" was Mojo's reply, very disappointed.Why waste time answering?It was the most obvious answer.
But then, Mojo had see that he was wrong.For the 1st time, he was happy for be wrong.He was happy for the definitelly answer:
"We are in"
Sooooooo...?What ya think?
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 5, 2005 18:35:59 GMT -5
Hi eevryone, well, one more time thanks for review!Well, that's chapter is, er, boring...But it' necessary!-to next chapters makes sense...
Chapt 5
"okaaaaay boys..." Mojo said as he was staring at them."The plan will need time."
"why?" Boomer asked
"Cause its very complex" Mojo said staring confused at the blond ruff
"why?"
"cooooooz, it's the way that I made"
"why?"
"coz, I made like that, and to work, like that have to be!" Mojo were began to lose his patience
"Why?"
"SHUT UP!" Mojo cried angry.
"oh, alright" Boomer replied calmly "Monkey dude you have some problems with stress, don't ya?"
At that remark Mojo was gritting her teeth more and more furious at Boomer.
"er, Monkey du-" Butch began
"whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttt!" Mojo yelled back with all the anger that he took from Boomer
"er...what should we do?" Brick replied as Butch was just staring at Mojo blow out-THAT GUY LOOKS SOOO FUNNY!
Mojo slapped his own forehead and sighed heavilly trying to calm down.
"ok!" Mojo said under his breath, glaring at the boys "1st:I'll need work at the machines, then, you'll began to act-"
"what? No way!"Brick interrupted
Mojo stared at the red headed boy
"We aren't here to 'be part of the plan'-we are here to be the plan with you" Brick was looking very determined
"sooo..." Mojo was trying to understand what the leader was saying
"so, we'll work at the machines with ya!" Brick said stubbornly
Butch and Boomer gasped
"huh?"
what?Was Brick crazy?Work?Machines?Brick is soooooooooo out of his mind!Mojo will never accept this!
"ok" Mojo said as he shrived his shoulders.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT!
"But no ,today.We'll start the work tomorrow.As tomorrow is the day after today,as the day today is the day that we are living in-"
"yeah yeah...we got it monkey dude.Buuut..." Brick said sighing
"huuuh?" Mojo murmured
"We need aplace to sleep..." Brick said his eyes meeting Mojo's eyes emotionally-YEAH!Brick was a really really good actor!
"boy" Mojo began "you can be a good actor, but I'm not stupid.I know what you want.So, stay!"Mojo said, surprisingly short
The boys' eyes widened happily.wow, dude...what a father!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------Night-
The boys were at the guests' room-yeeees, Mojo have a guests' room!Incredible huh?
It wasn't a 'simple' room...it had 3 comfortable beds, tv, dvd...The boys were just messing around the room, and whatching tv...you know...doing 6 year old boy stuffs!
"Brick..." Boomer began as he stopped
"huh?"Brick muttered without look at Boomer
"er...I was thinking..."
"YOU?Thinking?Since when?" Brick shouted shocked at the fact that Boomer can think.
Boomer paused a bit
"dude" the blond boy was serious "about what you said to Mojo today..."
"what?" Brick wasn't understanding
"PLEASE MAN!WOOOORK?MACHIIINES?WHAT'S THE SUCH DEAL?" Boomer blowed out
Butch who was just staring at his brothers until now shouted
"yeah!whassup with that man!WHERE'S YOUR d**n MIND?"
Brick sighed impatiently
"you two didn't get the point do ya?" He said, knowing the answer
Butch and Boomer stared at each other with the don't you will answer? glare
Brick sighed again
"Look, remember what happened last time that we get help to beat the girls up?"
Butch and Boomer were blank
"WITH HIM YOU IDIOTS!"Brick cried
"ah!yeah, yeah, that crab..." Boomer realised
"no stupid!He's a crustacean!"Butch shouted, realising the same
"no he-"
"SHUT UP!"Brick yelled before his brothers start a discussion "We just agree with every single d**n word from that crab"
"Crustacean" Butch tried 'correct'
"Whatever!So, we just agree with him, and we didn't know anything about the stupid idea.Just that the spell made us bigger!"
"huh, yeah, aaaaand?" Butch wasn't getting the point
"WE NEED KNOW EVERY SUCH THING ABOUT THAT PLAN!"
"why?" Boomer was more confused than Butch
"coz..." brick started slowly,(maybe saying it calmly the idiots could understand) "Coz we will know what to do, IF the girls eventually got some idea to beat us!"
Boomer and Butch was just staring at the leader.
Then just like when you switch on a light:
"oooh!yeaaah!Yeah!That's it!" both finally had get the point
Brick sighed and shook his head.Tomorrow will be a loooooooong day!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------well, yeah, that's it!It's not a such big thing...But, how I said:It's necessary...
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Post by Enigma on Dec 5, 2005 19:18:42 GMT -5
Great fanfic, Ghostie. I really liked it. Mojo cracked me up. ;D As I said on MSN, apart from the grammar, it´s a very good fanfic. I enjoyed reading it.
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 6, 2005 11:39:23 GMT -5
hey! ;D chapt 6-I didn't want to swear, so I used the old fashioned (beep!) Chapt 6 2 days later... "Well, boys..."Mojo started casually "after 2 days of hard work to us (actually; Mojo worked, Brick tried to pay some attention and Butch and Boomer watched, trying don't sleep while Mojo was talking...and repeating again what he said)I can guess that you are able to act.Meaning that after 48 hours of work, and when I say I work I mean-" "yeah, yeah, monkey dude we got it man!"Brick cut him off "What should we do now?!" "Well, I'll explain you." Mojo began annoyed by the interruption-"Since I created that plan, I know all the details, and when I know all the details-" "what should we do?!" Brick yelled cutting the monkey again Mojo gritted his teeth "HEAR ME!!!!!!!!!!!" he cried furious The boys just stared at his madness "oh, alright, don't need get sooo mad monkey dude!" Brick simply said raising an eyebrow at Mojo ____________________________________________ At Pokeyoaks Kindergaten... The girls are at the art class...coloring! Everything looks so fine to everybody.Except for Blossom.Who has that worried look at her face.Now, since monday! "OH THAT'S IT MAN!" Buttercup yelled "Blossom, what the heck is going on with you?!" "me!?" the red head was shocked.She hadn't done anything. "common,it's more than obvious that you have some problem, wassup?!" "huh?!But how do you-" "Blossom;"Buttercup was staring serious at her sister "It's obvious, you aren't normal,you have that strange look at the face which says 'something is not okay' please, tell me now!I'm sick of it!" the brunnete was furious-she hated the suspense. "it's just..." Blossom didn't know how to say "But everything is too fine" Buttercup is now, ahem, confused..."huh?!" she gasped dumbly, raising an eyebrow "YEAH!I mean...I have the feeling that something is going on!" "why?!" "Coz everything is soo normall!" "Blossom, do what you do better and BE LOGICAL!" Blossom sighed.It was very hard to explain!And it's because that she hadn't talk to anyone about the feeling. "Buttercup, we never have a normall day, like, no fight crimes and stuff!" "Maybe because most of the villains are...in the jail?!" Bubbles entered at the dialogue, looking innocently, but wanting to be sarcastic. "AND ABOUT MOJO AND THE RRB'S?!THEY AREN'T AT THE JAIL!WHAT ABOUT THIS?!HUH?!WHY THEY AREN'T TYING TO KILL US?!HUH?" Blossom was yelling furious, she couldn't believe!It was so noticeable!!! When she realised all the class, and Miss Keane were staring at her, shocked and curious.Blossom's face went red by mebarassment And at that exactly moment, the hotline ringed.Buttercup gave Blossom the are you happy now glare. Blossom just sighed.And went get it, discreetly than the normal. "er, ur...wassup, mayor?" she asked, trying to look normal and not so embarassed Well, the voice wasn't the Mayor, AGAIN! "Hi sweet!I'm fine, wassup with you?" the voice, was Brick, AGAIN! "BRICK!" she growled annoyed "what the fu-" she began, but managed to control herself "what the heck are you doing???" she asked slowly "aawww...are ya mad?"Brick asked sarcastically Blossom gritted her teeths "that's it!We are going to the Tonwsville hall NOW!" she yelled at the phone "hall?!Aaawww, sorry, but the date isn't at this time honey.I want bring you to somewhere, different!" Blossom could say the RRB's were laughing hard.She tried to control herself. "okay...where are you?" she hissed There was a pause of silence until Brick say: "hhmm...what a voice huh?What about met me at Mojo's place and hiss me some more?" Brick didn't want to say it!Man!From where that come from??? Ok... we can say that Blossom is very rational sometimes... But not that time. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!THAT'S IT YOUR (beep!) (beeP!) such jackass!I'M GOING TO THAT (BEEP!) AND BE (BEEP!) READY!COZ YOU'LL HAVE THE BIGGEST (BEEP!) BATTLE IN ALL YOUR (BEEP!) LIFE!" Blossom was screaming the loudest that she had ever screamed. And to her sisters (ignoring the scared glares) "TO MOJO'S PLACE!NOW!" with that the redhead flew away in a very high speed.Yeah, I think you could say she's angry... ____________________________________________Bubbles and Buttercup tried to catch their sister "BLOSSOM!BLOSSOM!" Buttercup yelled "What's going on!?" "Are ya mad?!" Bubbles asked Blossom sundelly stopped.And turned to Bubbles, with a wicked grim "What do you think Bobble head?!" Blossom yelled Bubbles stared offended "huh?" "oh!common!you crybaby!what about put that small thing called BRAIN to work huh?" Bubbles was about to cry.And before Blossom said anything, she was cut off by Buttercup "man!STOP THAT!WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM" "My problem...my problem is Brick" "huh?" "yeah!I DUNNO WHAT HE HAVE, BUT...HE CAN MAKE ME LOSE MY GRIP!" "Brick?!Wsa he at the phone?!" Buttercup asked worried "yes...he told us to met him and the brothers at Mojo's place!" and suddenly Buttercup gulped "Bloss.." Buttercup began "about your strange feeling..." Blossom stared at her sister, then gasped "no way!" "what?!" Bubbles was the most confused of all "let's gettem!" Blossom yelled, fogetting about all the Brick make me lose my grip stuff. And the three girls flew in high speed to Mojo's observatory sorry 4 any grammar mistakes!
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Post by Enigma on Dec 6, 2005 12:32:36 GMT -5
Whoa! You sure Blossom would loose her cool and yell like that? Still, nice story. Can´t wait to see how it goes. ;D
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 6, 2005 16:18:48 GMT -5
Chapt 7-I'm so sorry!
The girls arrived at Mojo's place and all that they saw was the darkness.They looked around.It was impossible see anything!
And none of them had the courage of search for something.They were just staring with fear.Suddenly they heard a voice
"hey honey..." that made Blossom become furious.
"so, we are here" she began, staring at the nothing" wath do you want?!" Blossom was trying her best to hide the fear, and looks brave
"hhhmmm...I was right" Brick was too calm
"in what?!" Blossom was hating it
"what a voice you have huh?"
Bubbles and Buttercup gasped in unison "what?!"
"Too sad I won't hear that voice for soo long" he was up to something Blossom was feeling it
"w-w-why?" Blossom began to stammer.
d**n!He was making her lose her grip again
"GUESS!" Brick cried.
And then all the girls become unconcious.
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Blossom woke up.But he couldn't open her eyes...OR MOVE HER BODY!OR TALK!Her body was all tied up.She was desperate!
'Calm down Blossy...'she thought to herself 'think very well...You need a plan, sooo...let's think:what it could be?Well, we know, it's really bad, and it should be or Mojo or...the...RRB's, ok.They should be trying to kill you.But, there's no worries...Let's keep the control...They sure have some, gun, to hit ya, or, they have a big knife, to kill ya, or...are they...(gulp!) putting ya in a...box, and...burying...But there's any worrie...he he, let's think in a plan, and, and...'OH DARN IT!I WANT GET OFF HERE!'
And with that she began to shake maniacally all her body trying to get free, she began to try scream for some help.(althoughtshe couldn't talk!)
Suddenly she received a hard punch at the face.
"SHUT IT!" she knew that voice...she finally opened her eyes and saw...
BRICK! she tried to yell but it was futile!
Brick rolled eyes and sighed.
"Mojo!She's awake" Brick yelled to somewhere.They were at a dirty and dark room.And when she took a look, Mojo was staring at the door.Grinning evilly
"mhahahahahahahahaha!PERRRFECT!and when I mean, perfect I wanna say excellent!Without mistakes, and when I say without mistakes I wanna mean-"
"yeah!I know all the whole d**n story monkey dude!!!" brick cut him off "so...what we do with her?!"
"Bring her to downstairs!And when I mean downstairs I wanna say the place that's not here is-" Mojo began
"ok ok ok "Brick said and suddenly stopped "b-b-but how do I do that?!"
"take her and bring dowsntairs" and with that Mojo went downstais
Brick was shocked.He looked at Blossom just like if she was an alien.He gulped and took a long and deep breath
'ok, man' he start to think to himself 'go on, ho-ho-hold the d**n girl, it's easy, he he...'
Blossom was just staring at him.She was afraid, she felt she didn't have any power.Mojo probably had used some powerfullmachine.And now, any attack from Brick would hurt her hard.Blossom was shaking and breathing heavilly,but she was trying her best to look brave. Mojo probably have a plan in his mind.What would be?OH NO!Bubbles and Buttercup what happened to them?!
Brick was staring back to her.She is always so corajous and-STOP THAT!Brick shook his head, trying slap all those stupid thoughts.ggggrrrrr...
"BRICK!MAN!" Butch yelled.It was just when you receive a slap across the face.OK, go, and bring her to Mojo!
So, Brick (FINALLY!) decided to do something.And took Blossom's body.As he did it he suddenly began to sweat!And, and was he trembling?! -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Brick arrived at Mojo's underground lab-yup, Mojo have an underground lab, amazing, huh?
At the lab Butch, Boomer and Butch were awaiting for Brick.
Buttercup and Bubbles were in a jail.Awake, and different of Blossom they weren't tied.
Butch stared at Brick
"man!You took so long!Why?"
"YEAH!" Boomer 'completed' "And why you are sweating?!"
Brick's eyes widened adn he start stammer "I, I, I,it, er..."
Butch, Boomer and Mojo werer staring at him.OH!BLOSSOM IS STARING TOO!er...but. er, who cares he he he
"Where I put that thing!?" Brick yelled at them.Blossom glared at him.THING?!
"with the other two!" Butch told
"oh, alright!"and with this Brick opened the jail where Bubbles and Buttercup were and throwed Blossom there abruptally.
"Blossom!" Bubbles shouted happilly "Are you fine!??Bloooooosssoooomm!!!" Bubbles hadn't realised that Blossom was tied, and her mouth was covered by a tape.
Buttercup rolled her eyes and sighed, as she took the tape off Blossom.
The redhead began to pant, in relief
"GIRLS!YOU ARE FINE!"she exclaimed happilly "Wha-What happened to us?"
"MOJO AND THE ROWDYRUFFS!" Bubbles shouted "they are working together"
"er, Bubbles, it's just a bit obvious, isn't it?!" Buttercup said, and then to Blossom "I heard them talking, looks like they have a machine!And they were planning that since days ago!"
At that, Blossom looked down.God!She should knew that!She was the leader!She should know when something is going on!Actually she already knew that!But she didn't act!It was all her faulth!If she had began to act earlier, they wouldn't be in that situation!A few tears began to rolled down her cheeks.
"g-g-girls" she whispered, both looked at the redhead "I'm sorry."
"what?!"both gasped
"Look, I know I commited a mistake.I'm so sorry girls!I'll, I'll fix it.I promise"
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 8, 2005 6:27:25 GMT -5
Chapter 8 -tears tears tears...
"SILENCE!" Brick yelled, trying to ignore Blossom's tears.The girls sudenly stopped,and shout round to Brick
"So, how are my darling feeling today?" Brick continued very sarcastic.Blossom glared at him, she was feeling a mix of fear and angry.
She got up and stared at him "What's all this?" was all she could say
"You really really didn't get it?" Brick said, raising an eyebrow at her.It sounded as a provocation to Blossom
"SURE I GOT IT!" she yelled "I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S YOUR PLAN!AND I WANT TO KNOW NOW!"
All the boys, Mojo, and even Blossom's siters were staring at her.WHERE'S ALL THE FEAR?!
"Look,"Brick said scowling at Blossom "1st:Don't you dare yell at us.Or we have good way of punishments!"
Blossom just could turn away and close her eyes.
"2nd, it's too soon to we tell the plan.But don't worrie, we have a very kind soul, we'll let ya know" Brick said sarcastically evilly
At that the girls gulped.Butch and Boomer laughed too.Mojo just stared at them,confident. ____________________________________________ Later...
Mojo had brought a machine...It was some kind of laser.Apparently just like any other laser
The girls were staring at the thing.Is it?Nothing extraordinary?Just another laser?!Any huuuge weapon?!Or...some liquid to burn them inside?!Oh, please!
Buttercup laughed "You must be kidding chimp!" she yelled at Mojo
"WHAT?" Mojo shouted shocked.How dare she?!
"OH PLEASE MOJO!Look at that thing!It's ridiculous!It'll be just like your others stupid plans!Where Blossom'll made a plan to beat you up!"
"I doubt!Since that plan is different than the others plans, althought it really looks like my other plans, but he just look similar, but he's different mean-"
"YOU GO TO ANOTHER DIMENSION!" Butch cried happilly cutting Mojo off
"WHAT?!!"All the three girls stared with wide eyes
"That's it!" Mojo continued a bit annoyed by Butch's interruption "And that's mean-"
"YOU GO DISAPPEAR!"
"B-b-b-but how?What dimension?!You can't do that!" Blossom cried histerically, showing fear clearly
"Sure I can!If I couldn't do that I sure would not be doing it.And since I'm doing it, it means that I can do that!So, I think I showed clearly how I can do that!Since-"
"MOJO!" Brick cut him off "I think they got it!" and to Blossom "So, I guess your woman's brain doesn't need any more explanations..."
Blossom glared at him.Then dropped her head.
"Please tell me:for where we go!?" she said as she was glaring back to Brick
Brick looked at her.His dark red eyes meeting her bright pink eyes.Suddenly, he felt sad.He felt like don't want to do that!OhMan!She's so cute!NO!NO!STOP!STOP!YOU HATE HER REMEMBER!?
"A lost dimension" he told quietly
"what?!" All the girls were now, glaring at them.
"It, it, is not true" Blossom hissed in a sadly voice, some tears rolling down her cheeks.
Brick's eyes widened.Now, he's feeling really guilty.For the 1st time in all his life, he made her cry!And he's feeling horrible!It was just a knife into his heart!OH GOD!HE HAVE ONE!AND IT'S NOT MADE BY ROCK!!!
"OOOOOOOH YES!I DISCOVER THAT LOST DIMENSION YEARS AGO!AND IT'LL BE ENOUGH POWERFULL TO DESTROY YOU ALL!" Mojo shouted triumphly "BELIEVE!BECAUSE IT'S TRUE!AND THE FACT OF THAT BE TRUE IT'S MEAN IT'LL HAPPEN, ANDHAPPENING IS REASON TO IT BE TRUE!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!" Mojo starts to laugh maniacally
Bubbles was histeric
"I DON'T WANT DISAPPEAAAAAAAAARRRR!!!!!WHAAAAAAAAAAAWHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"
"ALRIGHT!" Butch cut Mojo's maniacal laugh "TIME TO ACT!LET'S SEND THE LOSERS TO SPACE!"
That's made Brick jump!IT'S NOW!Blo, I mean, her, I mean, THEM will disappear!It's a thing to be happy about!HE HE HE...isn't it?
"YEAH!let's go!" Boomer cried as he flew to the machine, and stopped "er, Monkey Dude...How will we do that?"
"As it is at the PowderPuffs direction; it's right on them, and how it'll hit them, it's at the perfect position-"
"How we do that?!" Butch shouted, he was with Boomer
"PRESS THE RED BUTTON!"Mojo was getting really furious with so much interruptions!
"k..." Butch said calmly as he stared at Boomer, and his blond brother was doing the same.
"HEY BRICK!" Butch shouted
Brick gulped.Oh man!Did they notice something?!Brick slowly turned round "y-y-yeeees??"
"wanna press the button?!" Boomer completed
"what?ur, er, no, g-go you two I'm fine!he he...I'll just...watch!" and with that he tried his best grin
Mojo realised Brick wasn't fine!He was hidding something..Was he...no, it's impossible
Boomer and Butch glared at each other and shrived they shoulders "alright..LET'S GETTEM!" they shouted in unison.
Brick was staring at Blossom.She's going.Permanently.He'll never be able to see her smile, or her bright pink eyes, or...At that exactly moment Blossom shout round at him.And it wasn't any look.She was in tears.Her eyes were now red eyes.Brick suddenly wanted to stop all that.He suddenly wished hold her strongly and stop all these tears...
Suddenly, the laser began emit a powerful white light.Which hit directly the girls!
And then, everything turned into darkness.
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Post by Enigma on Dec 8, 2005 6:45:21 GMT -5
Brick with feelings? Now it´s getting real exciting. Can´t wait to read the next chapter.
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 8, 2005 15:18:16 GMT -5
Thanks Enigma! ;D
Chapt 9
Then the darkness the girls become unconcious.And couldn't see anything.
Some minutes later Blossom slowly tried open her eyes.She was feeling like landing in a street.She could hear people talking and...cars???
When she realised that she opened her eyes completely and that's true!Thye were in a city!?And...wow!It's a huge city!But it had something that remembered Townsville...!
She took a beter look around and realised Bubbles and Buttercup near of her.
She sighed in relief.Thank God!They are safe!Blossom slowly managed to stand up.And flew to them
"Buttercup!Buttercup!" she whispered as she was shaking her sister slightly.The brunnette slowly opened her eyes and jumped when she saw
"Blossom!" she shouted happilly "OH MAN!I'M SO-OUCH!" she cried in pain when she tried to stand up
"Be careful..." Blossom answered."Mojo's machine made something to us...We have powers, but we are so exhausted!"
"OH, THAT MOTH-"
"Buttercup!"
"OK OK...now, can you help me here???" she asked to Blossom.The redhead smiled and took ker sister hand as she stood up.
The brunnette sighed and looked around "WHERE'S BUBBLES?" she gasped super worried, a bit hysteric.
"behind you." Blossom asked, calmly.Buttercup suddenly stopped and looked behind her.
"oh, yeah, I knew it!I was just...testing you!"she said as she saw Bubbles.Blossom just rolled her eyes."Yeah, sure!"
Buttercup slowly walked towards Bubbles."!WAKE UP!" she said a super loudy scream
"AAAAAHHHH!I DON'T WANT DISAPPEAR!!!AAAAaaahh...oh!Hi girls!!" Bubbles simply said.Buttercup rolled her eyes.
"Bubbles are you fine!?" Blossom asked worried.
"Nah, I'm good..." the blond replied calmly as Blossom helped her to stand up, then Bubbles looked around
"Where...is that the 'lost dimension'?" Bubbles asked
"NO!DUH!" was the reply from Buttercup "That chimp commited some mistake and send us to another place."
"yeah...I guess so..." Bubbles said smiling
"alright girls" Blossom began "All we need to do is look for some information!LET'S GO!" and with that they flew away (With much difficulty).Looking for someone that could help (a guard or something...)
"Girls...did you noticed some things...Looks like Townsville huh?" she asked not too worried and happilly
"YEAH...Man, that's freaking me out!" Buttercup shouted.
"aaaaawww...I think it's nice!" Bubbles was...glad?!Well, she's the laughter and the joy, isn't she?
Suddenly they saw people screaming and running desperates.
"OK...now, this is strange!" Bubbles' smile fadded.
"hhmm...yes...it is." Blossom murmured "Whart would that-"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" all the three screamed shocked when a huge explosion happened.
"WHAT WAS THAT!COMMON!" Blossom demmanded to her sisters ready to act, and forgetting the exhaustion.And the three flew to see-OH MY GOD!WHAT'S THAT?!!!!
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Post by Yasmin on Dec 8, 2005 20:47:20 GMT -5
Good chapter!
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Post by ghostgirl on Dec 9, 2005 16:38:11 GMT -5
thanks! ;D-Well, that's chapter,well to me is a bit lame Chapt 10 Near of the explosion the girls saw three streaks flying desperatly in all the directions around a monster! "ok...now; it's too much coincidence!" Blossom was scared "Should we go see what's that!" Bubbles asked. "I dunno...It could be-" BUM!Another explosion!And that's time the monster fell, very hurted.When that's happened the three streaks stopped and flew away. Blossom was just staring at the scene "er..Blossom?" Buttercup asked "LET'S FOLLOW THEM!" and with that the red head flew away with Bubbles and Buttercup "But Blossom!Follow who!" Bubbles asked Blossom didn't replied.She just pointed at the three streaks. "WHY?" "something is telling me to do that!" Blossom was very determined Bubbles and Buttercup looked at each other.Blossom never follows her intuition! "red..are ya sure!" Buttercup asked Blossom nodded.Her sisters just shrived their shoulders. Suddenly Buttercup saw something. "GIRLS!LOOK OUT!" her screamed but was too late.Some kind of giant rock hit them!It was a part of a building, throwed by the monster When that happened the three streaks stopped, flew to them, and caught them.Unfortunatelly the girls were unconcious and them couldn't see.But just hear. "WHO ARE THEM?" a high pitched female voice cried "Who cares!Let's kick his butt!" answered a very rough female voice "Calm Down!" said another female voice.That one was a bit hoarse and soft at the same time "I HAD AN IDEA! LET'S PUT THEM HERE!" With that them let the girls in a park. "ok." said the rough voice "and now?" "follow me!" the hoarse voice demmanded "Then we'll back to see them!" With that they flew away.After some seconds the girls could open their eyes. "Girls!What was that!" Blossom asked shaking her head "I dunno..." Buttercup replied dizzy, rubbing her head "But, is it just me or that sounded familiar?" The other two puffs nodded. "where they are!" Bubbles asked looking around. "OVER THERE!" Blossom said pointing to the sky The three streaks were flying around the monster and they are punching him. "What's that..." Buttercup began "This is getting weird!" "yes..." Blossom murmured scowling "Too weird!" At that the monster fell and now, he was definitelly doomed.And the three streaks flew to the girls "THEY ARE COMING!" Bubbles shouted.They all were scared. And the three streaks landed near of the girls. And they were three teenaagers girls.One red head.One blond and other brunnette! The girls took a better look.It can't be!The teenagers didn't have fingers, or nose, and they had BIG eyes!They were just like TEEN PUFFS? They were shocked.It can't be.They were all just staring at each other,and at the teens.Until the teen redhead walk near of the girls (the kids) "HI!" she said, she was the owner of the hoarse voice."How are you?From where you come?" she asked kindly. The girls took the opportunity to take a better look at her.She was tall, she had point and large breasts, flat belly, a thin waist and a pair of beautiful legs.Not so thick or too thin.She was wearing a satin pink cami top and black tight jeans.She had avery long straight hair.Which reaches to her hip, it was in a high ponytail. While the girls was just staring at the redhead who was staring back.Just like if she was realising something.Her mouth agog. "HEY!HEY!BLOSSOM!" The brunnette shouted, she was the owner of the orugh voice "What you think you are-" "Buttercup,look at them!"the redhead shouted pointing at the kids."Don't they remind -" The brunnette came near of them.She had short black straight hair, and a (very!) muscular body, but yet, feminine.She was as tall as the redhead.She was wearing black large ripped jeans, (soldier) boots and a dark green sleveless top. She just stared at the kids.Just like the redhead. "OH MY d**n GOD!" she gasped under her breath. The girls (kids) were more and more shocked.BUTTERCUP?BLOSSOM! "BUBBLEBRAIN!" the brunnette shouted to the blond teenage. "hey!" the blond exclaimed, she was the owner of the high pitched voice "DON'T CALL ME-" "COMEHERE!" the brunnette called.The blond girl just rolled her eyes. "what?" she asked in a lazy voice. The blond had a very thin body.Too thin.Super thin.Ultra thin.Too much thin.SOO THIN!Her hair was in two long ponytails, that hang down past her shoulders.She was wearing a baby blue belly top, and tight white jeans.She stared at the girls (kids). "Sooooooo..." the blond teen asked "what is sooo, like, shocking!" "Bubbles!" the redhead shouted at the blond "look at them!" pointing to the girls "Didn't them remind you someone!" The blond teenager stared at the kids. "OOOOHHH...like, yeah!I just can't, like, remember who!" The redhead stared at the blond, the brunnette just rolled her eyes. "er...Who exactly are you...?" the redhead asked to the girls. Blossom shook her head. "OH, yeah, er, I'm Blossom,"Blossom tried to begin." that's Bubbles and...Buttercup.We are..." "THE POWERPUFF GIRLS?" All the teens gasped in unison. "YES!WE ARE!WHY ALL THE SCARED FACES? Buttercup said annoyed glaring at the teens "do you know who we are?" the teen Brunnette replied asking, so annoyed as Buttercup "NO.But we would like to know" Blossom replied before Buttercup say something not so 'kind' The redhead sighed."I'm Blossom.These are Bubbles and Buttercup.And we are the Powerpuff Girls!" There was a freak silence between the kids and the teensBlossom was staring at the teens.Then she took a minute to think. "HOW OLD ARE YOU? Blossom asked "16..." the redhead teen replied "what year we are now?" "2015!" the teen brunnette replied raising an eyebrow At that; Blossom just could gasped under her breath"Looks like Mojo didn't send us to a lost dimension-but to a future dimension"
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Post by Yasmin on Dec 9, 2005 16:48:00 GMT -5
Wow! That was a relly cool part. I'm not sure if a teen bubbles would act like that, but still! GREAT chapter!
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